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Is this a good rap verse?

I'm just a beginner so any advice is appriciated always listen to my dreams, but I will speak, scream and are more than just bright beam that are like the Luxor Las Vegas my name in lights is what I've seen at night when I sleep and where we are always lead, but I know not to walk jump climb to the summit is steep and sacrifices will not be cheap cuts that are believed to be deep going to be more of a tear lotta cry, but none of that going to stop me achieving what I see when I sleep and never ever closer that creeps on the combat phase to reap what they sew

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Adam Lambert Bowie Medley San Diego 7/18/09